First Contact In The Wilds
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First Contact In The Wilds

by Ronell Naude · 2026-09-19

Two people lost in the wilderness encounter something unknown

15 chapters 29,265 words ~117 min read English

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Chapter 1

Lost After the Trail Breaks

The red blaze on the pine stood three feet above Anne’s head, bright as a fresh wound against the gray bark. She stopped so suddenly that Mike nearly walked into her.

“Where’s the trail?”

Below them, the mountainside fell away through fir and alder, steep enough that loose stones clicked and vanished before they reached the trees. Above, the slope tightened against a wall of dark rock. Between the two, the narrow path should have curved around the hillside and carried them toward the ridge.

It was gone.

Anne kept one hand on the pine. Its bark pressed through her glove, sharp and dry. She looked back along the route they had taken, searching for the last switchback, the pale strip of dirt between the bracken. It had been there ten minutes ago. She remembered stepping over a root shaped like a bent wrist. She remembered Mike complaining about the weight of his pack.

She did not remember passing a break.

“Maybe it’s higher up,” Mike said.

His voice came from behind her, too close and too certain. Anne turned. His face was flushed from the climb, a loose strand of dark hair stuck to his forehead. He shifted his pack and pointed toward the rock wall.

“The map says the trail crosses this contour.”

“The map says a lot of things.”

He pulled the folded topographic sheet from the side pocket. A corner had gone soft from rain, though the sky above them was clear. He spread it against his forearm and traced the thin brown line with one finger.

“We’re here,” he said. “The switchback should run east, then turn north.”

Anne looked east. The hillside broke open into a tangle of young trees and gray boulders. No path. No worn soil. No boot prints. Only the wind moving through the branches with a dry, restless hiss.

“How far to the marked trail?” Mike asked.

“If we find the switchback, less than an hour.”

“And if we don’t?”

She folded her arms, though the cold had begun to creep through her sleeves. “We find it before dark.”

That was the whole shape of the afternoon. Reach the ridge, cross the saddle, return to the marked trail before the light drained from the valleys. Their car waited at the lower lot, and the ranger’s warning about changing weather had seemed almost theatrical when they left that morning beneath a blue sky.

Now the sun had slipped behind the western shoulder of the mountain. Shadows filled the gullies. Anne checked her watch. Four twenty-three.

Mike studied the map again. “We can cut straight across.”

“No.”

“It’s forty minutes at most.”

“It’s a cliff.”

“It looks like a cliff from here.”

“It is a cliff from there too.”

He stepped toward the edge, and Anne caught the back of his jacket.

“Don’t.”

Mike looked at her hand, then at her face. The irritation between them was familiar, manageable. It had followed them up the mountain since lunch, when Anne had insisted they stay on the marked route and Mike had argued that the old survey line would save them time.

“I’m not going over,” he said.

“You were about to.”

“I was looking.”

“Look from farther back.”

He pulled free, but he moved away from the drop. Gravel shifted beneath his boots. A thin crack snapped through the hillside.

Anne heard it before she saw the earth move.

The edge beneath Mike’s right foot folded downward. Soil and stones slid in a sudden brown sheet, dragging fern roots and dead branches with them. Mike lurched, one arm flinging wide. Anne grabbed his pack strap and threw herself backward.

For one breath, the pack held him.

Then the strap tore loose from one shoulder.

Mike struck the ground on his knees. A stone skipped past his hand and plunged over the edge. The collapse widened with a grinding roar, opening a raw scar across the slope. The old trail appeared beneath it for half a second - a narrow ledge of packed dirt, broken cleanly in the middle - then vanished beneath a tumbling wave of rock.

Anne and Mike scrambled uphill as the mountainside came apart.

Dust filled her mouth. Branches whipped her cheek. Something hard struck her shin. She crawled behind the pine and pulled Mike after her, both of them pressed against the trunk while stones rattled through the trees.

The noise went on longer than it should have.

When it stopped, the silence seemed wrong.

Mike sat with one knee drawn up, breathing through his teeth. Blood darkened the fabric below his left knee.

“Are you hurt?”

“Just scraped.”

“Let me see.”

“It’s nothing.”

“Mike.”

He lifted his leg. The trouser fabric was torn, and beneath it a shallow cut ran across his kneecap. Blood gathered in a bright line and dripped onto the dirt.

Anne took the small first-aid pouch from her pack. Her fingers shook as she opened it. She cleaned the cut with a wipe while Mike stared downhill at the fresh collapse.

“That was the trail,” he said.

Anne pressed gauze against his knee. “Part of it.”

“The rest is under there.”

“Yes.”

He looked at the map, still clutched in his hand. Dust lay across the paper, obscuring the brown contour line.

Anne wrapped the bandage tight enough to make him wince. “Can you walk?”

“Can you stop asking questions you already know the answer to?”

She tied the knot and sat back on her heels. “Can you walk?”

Mike exhaled. “Yes.”

“Good. We’re going back.”

He laughed once, without humor. “Back where?”

Anne turned toward the trees. Their route behind them was still visible, but the slope had changed. The path they had followed upward narrowed into a shelf of loose dirt, and beyond it the hillside dropped toward a ravine choked with alder. They could retrace their steps, but the collapse had shaken loose stones above them. Every few seconds, pebbles ticked down through the branches.

“Lower,” she said. “We’ll find the last marked section and follow it down.”

“That puts us below the switchback.”

“That’s the point.”

“And if the trail collapsed below us too?”

“Then we deal with it when we reach it.”

Mike folded the map. “We should stay on the contour.”

“We don’t have a contour anymore.”

He looked at her, and the answer settled between them. Their bearings had depended on a line that no longer existed. The red blaze on the pine was the last reliable mark either of them could see.

Anne stood and tightened her pack straps. “We move before the light goes.”

They descended carefully, keeping the pine trunks between themselves and the drop. The hillside forced them sideways more often than down. Each step had to be tested. Moss slid under Anne’s boots. The ground gave softly beneath the leaf litter, hiding holes where roots had rotted away.

Mike followed close behind.

“Your compass?” he asked.

“In my front pocket.”

“Why haven’t you used it?”

“Because it tells us north. It doesn’t tell us where the trail went.”

He said nothing after that.

They reached a shallow shelf where the trees thinned. Anne crouched and searched for signs of passage. A broken twig. A heel mark. Scraped soil. Anything.

There - a faint depression beneath the ferns.

She pushed the leaves aside. The earth beneath was packed hard, but the line ended at a tangle of blackberry canes. Beyond it, the slope dropped sharply.

Mike came beside her. “That’s it.”

“It might be.”

“It’s the trail.”

Anne followed the depression with her eyes. It angled toward the ravine instead of away from it. The old route should have crossed the hillside in a clean, steady line. This one dipped and twisted, disappearing beneath the brush.

Mike pointed through the branches. “There’s another blaze.”

A pale mark showed on a fir trunk below them. Not red this time. White, narrow, and vertical.

Anne felt the skin tighten along her arms.

“That wasn’t on the map,” Mike said.

“It could be an old trail mark.”

“Then why isn’t it in the survey notes?”

She stepped closer. The mark was not paint. Its edges were too sharp, as if the bark had been pressed flat and bleached. Three short lines sat one above another, each the width of her thumb. No smear, no drip, no brushstroke.

Anne touched the trunk.

The wood was cold enough to hurt.

She pulled her hand back.

Mike noticed. “What?”

“Nothing.”

“Anne.”

“I said nothing.”

A gust moved through the trees. The pale mark seemed to brighten, though the light had not changed. Somewhere below, water struck stone in a steady, hollow rhythm.

Anne checked her watch again. Four fifty-one. The western sky had turned the color of old tin.

They could not remain on the shelf. The slope above was unstable, and the route behind them had become a gamble. Ahead, the faint depression offered a way down. It might join the marked trail. It might lead into the ravine. But standing still would not bring daylight back.

“We follow it,” she said.

Mike stared at the white lines. “You’re sure?”

“No.”

That answer unsettled him more than confidence would have.

Anne drew her knife and cut through the first curtain of blackberry canes. The stems snapped back, clawing at her sleeves. She went down one step at a time, using roots for handholds. Mike followed, his injured knee stiffening with every descent.

The depression became clearer below the brush. It was not a trail exactly, but something had passed through often enough to press the leaves flat. The direction pulled them deeper into the trees, toward the sound of water.

Anne found another mark on a stone.

Three white lines.

Then another on a fallen trunk.

Three lines again.

None of them faced the same direction. They appeared on the sides of objects that should have hidden them from anyone moving along the slope. One was underneath a branch. Another lay on the downhill face of a rock.

Mike stopped behind her. “We’re not going toward the trail.”

“I know.”

“Then turn around.”

Anne looked back. The hillside above had already swallowed their route. From here, the broken switchback was invisible. The last red blaze might have been a mile away or ten feet above their heads.

“We can’t climb back in the dark,” she said.

“We can’t follow something we don’t understand.”

The water below struck stone again. Once. Twice. Then a third time, spaced exactly like the marks.

Anne held the knife at her side. The trees ahead formed a narrow passage, their trunks pale in the failing light. At the far end, another white mark waited on a slab of black rock.

It was not three lines this time.

It was an arrow.

The point faced deeper into the ravine.

Mike came up beside her. His voice had lost its irritation. “Anne.”

She should have turned away. She knew that. The marked trail was behind them, or what remained of it. The safe choice had a shape, even if they could no longer reach it.

But the arrow was fresh-looking without being new. No weather had dulled it. No moss crossed its edges. It seemed to belong to the stone in a way paint never could.

Anne stepped forward.

Mike caught her wrist. “Wait.”

She looked down at his hand, then at the dark passage ahead.

“We need shelter before night,” she said. “This may lead to the ravine floor.”

“Or somewhere else.”

“Everything leads somewhere else now.”

For a moment, neither moved. Wind combed the branches overhead. The mountain gave a low, distant groan as another section of the slope settled.

Anne pulled free and crossed to the arrow.

The moment her boot touched the ground beyond the stone, something answered from below.

Not an animal call. Not water. A clear, hollow tone rose through the trees, as if someone had struck a glass bell deep inside the mountain.

Mike went still.

The sound faded, leaving the forest darker than before.

Anne looked at the white arrow. Its point seemed to angle farther downhill than it had a moment earlier.

Then she heard a second tone, closer.

She tightened her grip on the knife and started into the ravine, with Mike following because there was nowhere else left to go.

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"First Contact In The Wilds" is a fiction book by Ronell Naude with 15 chapters and approximately 29,265 words. Two people lost in the wilderness encounter something unknown.

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