A Hike In The Tongass
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A Hike In The Tongass

by G Angus · 2026-09-17

Four college hikers survive a relic-linked ordeal in Tongass.

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Chapter 1

The Hidden Burial Path

The trail marker was a strip of blue paint nailed to a cedar, half-swallowed by moss.

Mara Ellison brushed rainwater from her eyelashes and looked back at the three people waiting behind her. The marked Tongass trail narrowed between spruce roots and a wall of devil’s club. Beyond the painted tree, the ground dropped sharply into a side ravine choked with green.

“Tell me that isn’t the turn,” Jude Kavanagh said.

“It’s not,” Mara answered.

He stepped beside her, backpack scraping a branch. “The map says the trail bends east.”

“The map also says we’re still on the trail.”

“Barely.”

Cal Rusk shoved his hood back. His dark hair was already wet, and a thread of blood marked one cheek where a branch had caught him. “We could cut across the ravine and pick it up on the other side.”

Tessa Bell tightened the straps of her pack. “That’s not a shortcut. That’s a bad decision with better marketing.”

Jude glanced at her. “We came here to hike, not worship a blue line.”

“We came here for a day hike,” Tessa said. “There’s a difference.”

Mara kept her eyes on the ravine. Water moved somewhere below, hidden under ferns and fallen timber. The forest pressed close on every side, wet and immense. Even in summer, the light beneath the canopy had the gray cast of evening.

She wanted them to keep moving. That was the simple version. Stay on the trail, reach the overlook, take the photograph Tessa had promised her mother, and return before dark.

But something had caught her attention.

A line in the moss.

Not a root. Not a game trail. The earth beneath it ran too straight, dropping away from the marked path toward the ravine. A faint ridge, almost buried, continued between the trees.

Mara crouched. Her fingers hovered over the moss without touching it.

“What?” Cal asked.

“Nothing.”

Jude gave a short laugh. “You said that like it’s definitely something.”

She followed the ridge with her eyes. It vanished beneath a leaning hemlock, then appeared again several feet lower. The ground around it was strangely level, though the ravine sloped hard toward the stream.

Tessa came closer. “Mara?”

“I’m looking.”

“At what?”

Mara stood. “The trail may have shifted.”

“The trail shifted?” Jude asked.

“Erosion. Flooding. Something.” She pointed downhill. “There might be an old route through there.”

Cal peered into the ravine. “Or there might be a cliff.”

“That’s why we look before we step.”

Jude moved past her. “Finally, a plan.”

Mara caught his sleeve. “Not fast.”

He looked at her hand, then at her face. “I’m not going to sprint into the wilderness.”

“You were about to.”

“I was going to see if the ground existed.”

“Same difference.”

His smile faded, but he stopped. Behind him, Tessa muttered something about turning around. Cal took out his phone, lifted it, and watched the screen lose its signal.

“Great,” he said.

The argument began again, low and sharp, while Mara studied the slope. Tessa wanted the marked trail. Jude wanted to cut across. Cal wanted to check the map, though the map showed nothing but green contour lines and a blue stream.

Their voices blurred beneath the dripping leaves.

Mara stepped away.

The ridge led downward. She placed one boot on a root, then another on a patch of slick earth. Ferns slapped her knees. The air cooled as she entered the ravine, and the sound of the stream grew louder.

“Mara,” Tessa called.

“I’m checking the route.”

“You said not to go fast.”

“I’m not.”

The ground dipped beneath her next step. Her boot broke through a mat of moss, and she lurched forward. A cedar root caught her ankle. She grabbed a branch and held on while loose soil slid past her boot into the ravine.

“Mara!”

“I’m fine.”

She wasn’t. Mud had filled the tread of her boot, and her pulse had jumped hard enough to make her ears ring. But beneath the mud, beneath the roots and ferns, she had seen something pale.

A squared stone.

She lowered herself carefully and brushed away the moss.

The stone was part of a wall.

Not a natural outcrop. Its face had been cut flat, though time had softened the edges. Another block sat beneath it, then another, forming a narrow line beneath the forest floor.

Mara stopped breathing.

The wall continued into the slope, disappearing behind curtains of fern. She pushed through them and found a gap between two massive cedars. The opening was so low she had to duck.

On the other side, the ravine vanished.

She stood inside a shallow chamber carved into the hillside.

The ceiling was packed with roots. Water dripped through them in slow, cold taps. The walls were made of dark stone, each block fitted tightly against the next. Along the far wall, shallow markings ran beneath a film of black moss - curves and hooked lines she did not recognize.

A burial site.

The thought arrived whole and undeniable.

“Mara?” Cal called from outside. “Where are you?”

She turned toward the opening. Their voices sounded distant now, muffled by stone and earth.

“Come down,” she said.

Jude appeared first, pushing through the ferns. His expression changed as he crossed the threshold. Tessa followed, one hand pressed to her mouth. Cal came last, staring at the walls.

For several seconds, nobody spoke.

Then Jude whispered, “What is this?”

Mara moved deeper into the chamber. The floor was packed earth, dry despite the rain filtering through the roots. A low stone shelf ran along the back wall. It held nothing but dust and a scatter of pale fragments that might have been bone, or might have been splintered wood.

“Don’t touch anything,” Tessa said.

“I’m not touching anything.”

“You’re walking toward it.”

Mara stopped. The chamber was larger than it had seemed from the entrance. A second passage opened behind a curtain of hanging roots, too narrow for more than one person. The old wall continued around it.

Cal crouched near the entrance. “This isn’t on the trail map.”

“It wouldn’t be,” Mara said.

“How old?”

She shook her head. “I don’t know.”

Jude ran his flashlight along the carved blocks. The beam caught a pattern near the floor: three circles crossed by a line, repeated at intervals.

“Could be a hunting shelter,” he said.

“A hunting shelter doesn’t have a sealed stone chamber,” Tessa replied.

“People build weird things.”

Mara stepped toward the back wall. Her excitement rose despite the cold water dripping down her neck. She had read about burial caves in the Tongass, old places hidden in forests that swallowed roads and erased paths. Most were stories, fragments of local history, rumors repeated by hikers who wanted the woods to contain more than trees.

This was not a rumor.

She reached the stone shelf and saw a narrow recess above it.

Inside lay a small object wrapped in what looked like dark, hardened hide.

Mara leaned closer.

The object was no larger than her palm. A carved face stared outward from the wrapping, its features worn nearly smooth. Two tiny holes marked the eyes. A line of copper-colored metal traced the brow.

Her breath caught.

“Jude,” she said. “Look.”

He came beside her.

Tessa grabbed his arm. “No.”

“I’m looking.”

“From there.”

Jude ignored her and bent toward the niche. “That’s real?”

Mara nodded. “The burial site is real.”

The words escaped louder than she intended. They struck the stone and came back thinly from the passage.

Real.

The forest seemed to close around them.

Cal rose too quickly and hit his head on a root. “We need to leave.”

“Wait,” Mara said. “We should document it.”

“With what signal?” Cal held up his dead phone. “And why are we standing inside a grave?”

“We don’t know that it’s a grave.”

Tessa pointed at the shelf. “You just called it a burial site.”

“I said it might be.”

“You said it was real.”

Jude’s flashlight trembled across the object. “We can take a picture and go.”

“No one touches it,” Tessa said.

“Who said anything about touching it?”

“You did, with your face.”

Jude straightened. “You’re being dramatic.”

“I’m being careful.”

Mara barely heard them. The chamber had begun to feel smaller. The air smelled of wet stone and old cedar. Somewhere above, a branch cracked. All four of them looked toward the entrance.

Nothing moved beyond the curtain of ferns.

Cal lowered his voice. “We’re off-route.”

“We can retrace the ridge,” Mara said.

“Can we?” Tessa asked. “You nearly slid into the stream getting here.”

“I know where we came from.”

Jude swung his light toward the passage behind the niche. “Maybe it connects to the trail.”

“No,” Mara said.

“You don’t know that.”

“I know we shouldn’t go farther in.”

“Then we leave the way we came.”

The argument pulled tight between them. Jude wanted the shortcut. Tessa wanted out. Cal kept watching the entrance. Mara wanted one clear photograph, one careful record of the markings, something that would prove this place existed before they stepped back into the forest and let the trees erase it.

She took out her phone.

The screen lit her face blue. No service. The camera still worked.

“Mara,” Tessa warned.

“One picture.”

“Do it from there.”

Mara raised the phone, but her hand shook. The image blurred. She adjusted her stance and stepped closer to the shelf.

A pebble rolled beneath her boot.

The sound was tiny. It seemed to travel everywhere.

The wrapped relic shifted inside the niche.

Jude reached out instinctively.

Tessa slapped his hand away.

“What is wrong with you?” she hissed.

“I was stopping it from falling.”

“It wasn’t falling.”

“It moved.”

“Because she stepped closer!”

Mara looked down. A thin crack had opened in the packed earth beneath the shelf. Dust sifted from the stone and gathered on her boot.

“We’re leaving,” Cal said.

This time no one argued.

Mara backed toward the entrance, keeping the camera raised. The photograph flashed. For an instant the chamber shone white: the carved face, the dark shelf, the markings on the wall, and the four startled figures crowded beneath the roots.

Then darkness returned.

Outside, rain ticked against leaves. The ravine looked different from the way it had before, steeper and more tangled. The blue trail marker was invisible through the ferns.

Jude stepped out behind her. “Which way?”

Mara turned toward the slope.

The ridge she had followed down was gone beneath disturbed moss and sliding mud. Two cedar roots crossed where she remembered the line. Beyond them, the undergrowth formed a solid green wall.

“That way,” she said, pointing.

Tessa stared at the slope. “Are you sure?”

Mara opened her mouth.

From somewhere high in the trees came a long, hollow knock.

Once.

Then twice.

No one moved.

Cal whispered, “That wasn’t a branch.”

Jude looked back at the burial chamber. His flashlight beam caught the relic niche through the hanging roots, and the small carved face seemed to watch them from the dark.

Mara gripped her phone until its edge cut into her palm.

“We go up,” she said.

“Back to the trail?” Tessa asked.

Mara looked at the moss, the roots, the ravine that had already begun to rearrange itself around them.

“Yes,” she said, though the word felt less like an answer than a promise she had no idea how to keep.

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"A Hike In The Tongass" is a fiction book by G Angus with 33 chapters and approximately 60,006 words. Four college hikers survive a relic-linked ordeal in Tongass..

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