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Fogline Poison
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Fogline Poison

by Laurence Guidry · Published 2026-07-20

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8 chapters 23,648 words ~95 min read English

Unreliable-narrator murder mystery set in a foggy coastal town

Table of Contents

  1. 1. Fogline Poisoned at Harvest Night
  2. 2. Mara’s Story Changes in the Bar Light
  3. 3. The Mayor’s Smile Covers a Locked Drawer
  4. 4. Podcaster Lyle Soren Hangs Up on Truth
  5. 5. Evelyn’s Sister Tamsin Hart Breaks the Pattern
  6. 6. Mara Loses Her Witness Note in the Rain
  7. 7. Fogline Poison Revealed in the Harvest Lanterns
  8. 8. Mara Chooses One Story, Not Many

Preview: Fogline Poisoned at Harvest Night

A short excerpt from “Fogline Poisoned at Harvest Night”. The full book contains 8 chapters and 23,648 words.

Neon from the harbor stalls smeared across the fog like someone dragged a wet thumb over glass. The annual harvest festival had been loud an hour ago - clinking mugs, fiddles, the wet cheer of people pretending the rain couldn’t get in their bones. Now it was just Alderwick Lane, rain-dark and thinly lit, with the ocean pressing its cold face against the town’s throat. Evelyn Hart’s house sat at the end of the lane, windows filmed over, porch light buzzing the way a tired insect does before it gives up.


I stood under the eave with my coat half-open, listening to my own breathing and the steady hiss of water running off gutters. My phone screen kept going black and coming back, as if even it didn’t want to witness whatever came next. The air tasted like wet wool and salt. I told myself I was only waiting for a door to open.


Evelyn’s door didn’t open. It already had.


I remember the sound first - something soft and wrong, like a chair leg dragged across old wood. Then the smell, not the sweet candle-scent the neighbors would’ve used to dress up the evening, but a chemical bitterness that didn’t belong in a teacher’s home. My mouth went dry anyway, because my body had decided before my mind caught up. I pushed inside, calling her name once, and the house answered with silence and the faint, metallic tick of cooling pipes.


I wanted it to be an accident. I wanted my mentor to be sick the way people got sick in winter - too much wine, a headache that turned into something worse, a stumble, a clumsy fall. I wanted the story to land the way it always did in the classroom when a kid insisted their version was true: listen, then help. Fix it. Cover it with the right words.


But Evelyn Hart lay on her kitchen floor with her cheek turned toward the linoleum like she’d been listening for something. Her hand had fallen open, palm up, as if she’d reached for the smallest mercy. The lights in the room were dim, the curtains drawn, the whole place swallowing the festival noise as if it had never happened.


“Evelyn?” My voice came out thin, and I hated that it did. I hated that my eyes slid over her mouth first, hunting for the kind of mess a body made when it swallowed the wrong thing. I hated that I already knew, even before the paramedics arrived, that this wasn’t the kind of wrong I could talk my way out of.


Someone behind me said, “Ma’am - step back.”


I turned too fast. My shoulder knocked the doorframe. Rainwater dripped off my sleeve into a shallow puddle that had formed on the entryway tile. The man’s face was a blur under his hood. The only thing that stayed clear was his badge, catching light with an almost cheerful shine.


“Don’t - ” I started, and then stopped, because I didn’t have a plan beyond insisting there was no violence. No intrusion. No struggle. No forced entry. That was the sentence my mind kept building, like a bridge it could crawl across before the river arrived.


I pressed my tongue to the back of my teeth. “I came in. Her - her door was already unlocked.”


The man didn’t look convinced. He glanced at the door, then back at me, and I felt the shift the way you feel a floorboard tilt before it breaks. A second officer came in, boots squealing on wet tile, and their radios crackled with voices I couldn’t fully catch. Through it all, the house seemed to pull its breath in tighter around Evelyn’s body.


“No sign of a break-in?” I asked, too quickly. I heard my own desperation and tried to sand it down. “I mean, I didn’t see anything. I didn’t - ”


“Who are you?” the first officer said.


I told them. Mara Ellison. Substitute teacher, Evelyn’s former student, mentor, the woman who’d taken my scattered life and handed it structure like it was a gift. I watched their expressions register the name and then slide away from it, as if the facts of my relationship to her were less important than the fact that I was standing in her home with rain dripping off me.


The coroner arrived before the town’s curiosity could settle, because the night had a momentum to it. People came in clusters when tragedy gave them a reason. The neighbors’ voices were muffled by the fog outside, but I could hear them through the walls - an uneven chorus of condolences and questions, as if they could talk hard enough to change what had already happened.


I didn’t move much. I kept returning to the kitchen floor in my head, replaying it, trying to find the moment where I’d misread something. The smell hit me again, sharper now that I wasn’t alone in the room. Not just chemical - something floral beneath it, like a cheap perfume trying to cover a wound.


A paramedic leaned close to Evelyn’s wrist. “Time of death?” he muttered, and the question landed like a dropped tool.


“Don’t touch her,” I said automatically, and the room turned toward my voice. I hadn’t meant it as a command; it had been a reflex, the kind you get when you see something break and you want to glue it back together....

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"Fogline Poison" is a fiction book by Laurence Guidry with 8 chapters and approximately 23,648 words. Unreliable-narrator murder mystery set in a foggy coastal town.

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The book contains 8 chapters and approximately 23,648 words. Topics covered include Fogline Poisoned at Harvest Night, Mara’s Story Changes in the Bar Light, The Mayor’s Smile Covers a Locked Drawer, Podcaster Lyle Soren Hangs Up on Truth, and more.

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