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Lucky Find In The Ruins
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Lucky Find In The Ruins

by Ronell Naude · Published 2026-07-16

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15 chapters 40,833 words ~163 min read English

A mysterious find in abandoned ruins

Table of Contents

  1. 1. The Cracked Map in Dust
  2. 2. A Bellows That Breathes Smoke
  3. 3. The Rune That Won’t Translate
  4. 4. Floodwater Swallows the Stair
  5. 5. Her Fear of Being Used
  6. 6. The Door Locks Behind Her
  7. 7. A Lucky Coin in the Ash
  8. 8. The Watcher’s Name on Stone
  9. 9. Mara Chooses to Hide the Coin
  10. 10. The Ceiling Falls on Gideon’s Map
  11. 11. When Mara Runs Out of Breath
  12. 12. The Draft Leads to a Hidden Door
  13. 13. The Treasure Room Demands a Choice
  14. 14. Gideon Sable Breaks, Not Mara
  15. 15. Lucky Find Leaves a Warning

Preview: The Cracked Map in Dust

A short excerpt from “The Cracked Map in Dust”. The full book contains 15 chapters and 40,833 words.

The first thing Mara noticed was the way the old stone swallowed sound. Her boots didn’t echo the way they should have in the open air; they thudded once, then went quiet, as if the ruins were already tired of hearing people. The collapsed entry hall yawned ahead of her - half roof, half rubble - with a thin seam of daylight slicing through broken arches. Dust hung in the light like slow snow, making every step feel measured.


She’d come for a rumor: a lucky cache buried somewhere in the abandoned ruins, the kind that got repeated over cheap beer because it was easier than admitting you wanted a change. Mara didn’t mind wanting. She’d been careful with her carefulness on the walk in - no shouting, no sudden movements, no lingering in the open. The cold under her jacket told her she’d arrived before dawn properly warmed the stones. Her fingers were already stiff around the satchel strap when she pushed through the last fallen slab and crossed into the hall.


Inside, the air tasted dry and old. It carried the faint sourness of damp plaster trapped under years of debris, and beneath that a metallic tang that made her tongue feel too awake. The place had been sealed once, then broken - someone had torn it apart from the outside, leaving the interior to rot on its own. Mara kept her head down and moved along the wall where the stones still leaned, where the floor looked less like it might give way.


“Cache,” she murmured, not as a promise, just as a marker for her thoughts. The rumor had mentioned symbols - marks that pointed to something worth more than luck. If there was any truth in it, it would be in the places people had tried to hide.


Her satchel bumped against her hip as she crouched near a stack of fallen masonry. She brushed away grit with the back of her glove, expecting to find nothing but broken tiles and the usual scraps of abandoned lives. Instead her knuckles scraped on something that wasn’t stone.


A slab of wood - darkened, swollen at the edges - lay wedged beneath rubble. It wasn’t part of the building’s skeleton; it looked like a panel someone had carried in and shoved into the gap when the hall went silent. Mara leaned closer. The wood had warped, but along its surface ran thin grooves, like writing that had been pressed into the grain. Her breath fogged faintly in front of her, though the light was bright enough to show every dust mote.


“Come on,” she whispered, and dug her fingers into the cracks. The wood shifted with a reluctant groan, as if it had been waiting for her hands. When it lifted free, something fell from behind it - paper, stiff and fragile, folded too many times and kept intact by a crust of dried plaster.


Mara caught it before it could crumble. The sheet was smaller than her palm, cracked at the corners, the surface coated with a powdery film that clung to her skin. She turned it carefully, searching for the kind of neat map lines she’d seen in other rumors - simple directions, arrows, distances. What she found instead made her pause so hard her shoulder ached.


The markings weren’t drawn like a cartographer’s work. They were etched deeper than ink, cut with intention. Lines crossed and broke, then reconnected at angles that didn’t feel random. Small symbols sat along the routes - circles with slashes, slanted bars, shapes that looked like stylized doors. Most of the paper was blank, but in the center a jagged tear had split the design into two halves, leaving the image incomplete.


A map fragment.


It should have felt like victory. Mara’s pulse didn’t agree. The air seemed to tighten around her, the way it did right before a storm when the sky went too still. The metallic tang grew stronger, and she realized she was holding her breath without meaning to.


“Marks,” she said under her breath, tasting the word. “So that’s what they meant.”


A floorboard creaked somewhere behind her.


Mara froze with the map held flat between her palms. The sound wasn’t loud, but in this hall it carried like a confession. She listened, counting the seconds between one creak and the next. Nothing else followed - no footsteps, no voice - just the slow settling of dust.


She didn’t like silence with edges. She slid the map into the inner pocket of her satchel, pressing it down with her thumb, and stood carefully, keeping her weight low. When she turned, she saw only collapsed stone and the long glare of daylight reaching through the broken roof.


“Could’ve been a rat,” she muttered, but the lie didn’t soothe her. Rats didn’t pause. Rats didn’t make her skin prickle along her wrists.


Mara moved deeper into the entry hall, following the etched lines in her memory instead of the fragment itself. The symbols on the paper had names in them - at least, that was what her mind offered when she stared too long. A circle with a slash reminded her of a grate she’d passed near the outer wall....

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"Lucky Find In The Ruins" is a fiction book by Ronell Naude with 15 chapters and approximately 40,833 words. A mysterious find in abandoned ruins.

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