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The Controllers’ Promise
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The Controllers’ Promise

by Shonna Holliday · Published 2026-08-09

Created with Inkfluence AI

8 chapters 15,203 words ~61 min read English

A teen discovers mind-reading and future-seeing powers.

Table of Contents

  1. 1. The Night the Controllers Took Me
  2. 2. Fire in My Hands, Rules in My Head
  3. 3. Reading Minds in the Quiet Room
  4. 4. The Future Map They Won’t Show
  5. 5. The Transfer Van Smells Like Smoke
  6. 6. When My Visions Turn Against Me
  7. 7. The Promise Door Opens to a Lie
  8. 8. A New Promise After the Fire

Preview: The Night the Controllers Took Me

A short excerpt from “The Night the Controllers Took Me”. The full book contains 8 chapters and 15,203 words.

The porch light flickered three times above my parents’ front door before the bulb went dark.


I stood barefoot on the rain-slick sidewalk, eighteen years old for less than an hour, staring through the broken window at the living room where my mother and father lay motionless. Rain slipped beneath my collar. Somewhere behind me, a car engine growled.


I wanted one thing: to get back inside.


My mother’s phone glowed near her hand. If I could reach it, I could call for help. I could call anyone. The police. An ambulance. Someone who might tell me this wasn’t real.


I stepped toward the porch.


A black SUV swung around the corner without headlights. Its tires hissed over the wet street. The passenger door opened before it stopped.


“Mara Ellison!” a man shouted. “Move away from the house!”


I froze.


The voice didn’t belong to a police officer. The man wore a dark coat, no badge, and a silver mark on his throat shaped like a circle split by a line. Two others climbed out behind him.


Inside the house, something cracked.


I flinched, and the porch railing burst into flame.


Fire raced along the wet wood, bright and furious. I stumbled backward. The heat struck my face, though the rain should have killed it. For one impossible second, the flames curled toward my hand like they knew me.


The man with the silver mark stopped.


“There,” he said. “She’s active.”


“I didn’t do that,” I whispered.


The thought came from one of the others before his mouth moved.


She doesn’t know what she is.


I looked at him. His eyes widened.


“You heard me,” he said.


“No.” My voice shook. “I heard what you thought.”


The man in front raised both hands. “Mara, listen carefully. We’re not here to hurt you.”


My father had said those exact words once, when I was nine and a lamp exploded in my bedroom. He had found me crouched beside the bed, staring at the smoking wires.


Don’t tell anyone, he’d whispered. Not yet.


Now he was dead inside the house.


“You killed them,” I said.


“No.”


“Then why are you here?”


“Because they were found.”


The answer was too clean. Too practiced.


A gunshot cracked from inside the house.


I screamed and ran.


The fire leapt from the porch to the curtains. Orange light filled the windows. Behind me, the men shouted. One grabbed for my jacket, but I twisted free and sprinted down the sidewalk.


Rain blurred the streetlights into long yellow streaks. My feet slapped against the pavement. I could hear doors opening along the block, people waking, someone yelling about a fire.


A black shape moved at the end of the street.


Another SUV.


I turned toward the alley.


A vision struck before I reached it.


The alley appeared in pieces: a red door, a man’s hand clamped over my mouth, a needle flashing beneath a streetlamp. Then the image vanished, leaving me stumbling in the rain.


I stopped so hard my knees nearly buckled.


The red door stood ahead.


“No,” I breathed.


The men were closing in behind me. Their shoes splashed through puddles. The SUV waited at the mouth of the alley.


I spun toward the road instead, but a third vehicle blocked it. Its doors opened. More silver marks gleamed in the rain.


A woman stepped out. Her hair was braided tightly against her head, and she carried no weapon. She looked at the burning house, then at me.


“Mara,” she called. “Your parents knew this day would come.”


“Don’t talk about them.”


“They left instructions.”


“You’re lying.”


Her expression shifted, almost sadly. “You can read minds, but you still don’t know when someone is afraid.”


I reached for her thoughts.


The world tilted.


Her mind was not a voice like the others. It was a locked room filled with flashes: my mother crying at a kitchen table, my father hiding a metal box beneath the floorboards, a photograph of two strangers standing beside a white building. Then a single thought pressed through the darkness.


Not yet. If she remembers, she’ll burn everything.


I staggered.


The woman caught my elbow. Her fingers were cold and strong.


I set her sleeve on fire.


She released me with a sharp curse. Flames crawled over her coat. She slapped at them, and one of the men threw a heavy blanket around her shoulders.


I ran again.


Three steps.


That was all I got.


A hard impact struck my back, and I slammed onto the pavement. Water filled my mouth. Someone twisted my arms behind me. Plastic restraints bit into my wrists.


“Stop fighting,” the man above me ordered.


“My parents - ”


“Are dead,” he said.


The words landed harder than the pavement.


I saw my mother’s hands folding laundry. My father’s crooked smile when he pretended not to be scared of thunder. The birthday cake waiting on the kitchen counter, its icing already beginning to melt around the candles.


Eighteen candles.


I screamed and the streetlights exploded.


Glass rained down. Darkness swallowed the block. The men shouted as sparks burst from the vehicles. The SUV’s engine coughed and died.


For a moment, nobody touched me.

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"The Controllers’ Promise" is a fiction book by Shonna Holliday with 8 chapters and approximately 15,203 words. A teen discovers mind-reading and future-seeing powers..

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